坝上留字，我来抛砖，拼凑酸文，权充游记！（主贴更新七）

美人鱼

谢谢冷玉，
我终于看到我和小侄子骑马的pp了，，，

冷玉沉音

我们骑马回来了:

永无止境

引用第54楼玉儿于2006-07-26 16:56发表的“”:
为了完整，再续....
过劲了，有些勉强。（续五）

太多pp抢走了我的fans....sigh!

光看描写烟火了，喝酒呢？

花生

玉儿牵马呢

喜欢琥珀

续五很是敷衍...



大家说通不通得过?!!!

花生

搁头2年,玉儿怎么也能混个秀才!

冷玉沉音

引用第65楼喜欢琥珀于2006-07-26 21:31发表的“”:
续五很是敷衍...



大家说通不通得过?!!!

原续五的喝酒写实让玉儿给删了

快补回来,要不补顶贴了

一抹蓝云

我还没看到写实那部分呢,要不发短信给我看看?

玉儿

喝酒部分加上了，

这部分写的不好，重字，且多，对仗不工。
但是为了加入名字，就这样了，粗学，也是无可奈何。
但也因为这堆名字忒不雅了。

为了完整，尽量续完，
但说实话，基本过劲了，方寸灵台重被案牍琐碎占领了

懒得起

仔细顶
仔细看

一抹蓝云

果然是因为名字不雅,所以...

玉儿

中午时间完成最后部分，
自觉还满意，终不致虎头蛇尾。

有始有终，亦善之善者也！

一抹蓝云

最后结尾部分不错!我个人还是比较喜欢花海和篝火篇! [s:61]

懒得起

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老熊

玉儿坐马上还哆嗦呢